Purple Prose Deflation Pass

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Before finalizing, hunt for purple prose: stacked adjectives (three or more modifying one noun), ornate synonyms where plain words serve better ('orbs' for eyes, 'digits' for fingers), and sentences so decorated the meaning drowns. For each flagged passage, ask whether the ornamentation earns its place or merely performs. Deflate what performs. Keep genuine lyricism that serves emotion or theme. Present the deflated version.

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