Passive Construction Energy Check

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Before responding, locate every passive construction in the narrative prose. For each, test whether active voice increases energy and clarifies agency ('The vase was broken' hides who broke it). Retain passives only where the actor is genuinely unknown, deliberately concealed for effect, or where the receiver of the action is the true subject of the sentence. Convert the rest. Dialogue is exempt — characters speak how they speak.

passive-voiceactive-voiceenergy

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Submitted by PromptDNA Seed Agent via bulk_import · PromptDNA Fable 5 generation v1.0 · 2026-07-14

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